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Oct 30, 2006 9:09:53 GMT -5
Post by Wolfer on Oct 30, 2006 9:09:53 GMT -5
(ok please don't post until you have been accepted)
Ok everyone the first lesson we will be working on is putting some detail into our posts.I have seen alot that says,'he said' BORING so will anyone please post an example like that I had just posted?It can be anything,just type it and I will show you what you can do to it.
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zasc18
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If the #2 pencil is the most popular, why is it still #2?
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Oct 30, 2006 19:41:16 GMT -5
Post by zasc18 on Oct 30, 2006 19:41:16 GMT -5
"I will," he said
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Oct 30, 2006 19:46:29 GMT -5
Post by Wolfer on Oct 30, 2006 19:46:29 GMT -5
Good,now how can we change, "I will" he said" into something better? Who wants to try?
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Oct 30, 2006 19:47:32 GMT -5
Post by graywolf107 on Oct 30, 2006 19:47:32 GMT -5
"I will do it willingly."he exclaimed to the teacher.
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zasc18
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If the #2 pencil is the most popular, why is it still #2?
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Oct 30, 2006 19:48:35 GMT -5
Post by zasc18 on Oct 30, 2006 19:48:35 GMT -5
Is graywolf in the class?
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Oct 30, 2006 19:48:52 GMT -5
Post by graywolf107 on Oct 30, 2006 19:48:52 GMT -5
Yes, I am
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Oct 30, 2006 19:48:58 GMT -5
Post by Wolfer on Oct 30, 2006 19:48:58 GMT -5
Both you guys have been accepted,Oh and zasc it's 'solemnly'
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zasc18
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If the #2 pencil is the most popular, why is it still #2?
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Oct 30, 2006 19:49:32 GMT -5
Post by zasc18 on Oct 30, 2006 19:49:32 GMT -5
k
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Oct 30, 2006 19:50:59 GMT -5
Post by Wolfer on Oct 30, 2006 19:50:59 GMT -5
Ok very good now to spice up our posts,don't make them too long or too short and netspeak is not the way to go, so anyone want to give us an example?
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Oct 30, 2006 19:56:53 GMT -5
Post by graywolf107 on Oct 30, 2006 19:56:53 GMT -5
Frost Hunter flapped his wings hard and landed in the middle of the field.He looked around the field and smiled.He liked the cold air on his ears and the smell of flowers instead of the burning dessert in which he came from.Like always he folded his wings and walked around.
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Oct 30, 2006 19:59:03 GMT -5
Post by Wolfer on Oct 30, 2006 19:59:03 GMT -5
GOOD!Now anyone have an idea of how to make your post ][glow=red,2,300]attractive?[/glow]
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Oct 30, 2006 20:00:48 GMT -5
Post by graywolf107 on Oct 30, 2006 20:00:48 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300][shadow=red,left,300][/shadow][/glow]
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zasc18
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If the #2 pencil is the most popular, why is it still #2?
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Oct 30, 2006 20:04:59 GMT -5
Post by zasc18 on Oct 30, 2006 20:04:59 GMT -5
How do you do that?
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zasc18
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If the #2 pencil is the most popular, why is it still #2?
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Oct 30, 2006 20:08:11 GMT -5
Post by zasc18 on Oct 30, 2006 20:08:11 GMT -5
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Oct 30, 2006 20:12:13 GMT -5
Post by Wolfer on Oct 30, 2006 20:12:13 GMT -5
very well done,sometimes you might want to post like that to attract attention to the threade
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